Seashore Haiku version 2.0, 9th April, 2012

The waves raging up and down

As I calmly wait for my beer

Flashback and memories.

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3 responses to “Seashore Haiku version 2.0, 9th April, 2012

  1. Hi Tarun,Some memories stay long, don't they? Hmm..There is freedom in a haiku, however, it should be under 17 syllables. Yours comes up to 21 🙂 Please revise…

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