This Haiku Pines May 21, 2012

More than a year now
and still the core pines for love
I sit here, unloved, undone.

Emptiness dulls it
beating core sounds mechanical
“you must emerge” it calls.

Love the unloved
pump in life and make it alive
the pining disappears.
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11 responses to “This Haiku Pines May 21, 2012

  1. Nice pining thoughts ~ Just a small suggestion though that in writing haiku, you must be concrete in your images, rather than in abstract like this:empty vasepining for flowers,one year nowHope you don't mind ~ Smiles ~

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