Little Kimono and Sakura – A Senryu for Carpe Diem Haiku

In a kimono
she appears on the stage
tears in mother’s eyes.

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10 responses to “Little Kimono and Sakura – A Senryu for Carpe Diem Haiku

  1. Tarun, now this is a fantastic haiku…the only recommendation I would make is how you have it formed for instance:

    In a kimono
    she appears on the stage-
    tears in mother’s eye

    The period is not needed. Your ‘aha moment’ is very clear in the last verse. it can stand on its own independent of the first two verses…Bravo! Very nicely done!

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