Southard’s “the cry of a loon” Haiku

Southard’s haiku in the traditional 5-7-5 syllable setup. Since, this month Carpe Diem Haiku celebrates Southard’s collection, we haijin are asked to write our haiku in 5-7-5.

Southard’s haiku

across the still lake
through up curls of morning mist –
the cry of a loon

My Haiku

Tiny hut in sight
autumn breeze swaying the tree
scream of the TV

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