Carpe Diem “Make the Haiku Complete” #4, “rising up to heaven?”

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is it not the scent of plum-blossoms
rising up to heaven?

The moony moon
is it not the scent of plum-blossoms
rising up to heaven?

At Carpe Diem Haiku, Kristjaan challenged us to write the first line of this lovely haiku written by one of the haiku masters.
Note: Kristjaan messaged me yesterday and told me that they all miss me at Carpe Diem Haiku. I must not disappear now. And I will try my best, Kristjaan.

Senryu for Kristjaan

A nurse named Kristjaan
with his kind words
revived a dead poet

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