Renovation Haiku, April 20, 2012

Damage is done
will I win?
what is lost
Faith is the key
to win
what is lost
Look inside
ponder and transform
the core
Words are meaningless
as they come
only to fade
Prayer and action
to innovate
to renovate.
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2 responses to “Renovation Haiku, April 20, 2012

  1. Nice thoughts…If you want the 3-5-3 syllabic count, it goes like this: look inside (3)ponder your mistakes, (5)change the core (3) For the 5-7-5 syllabic count, it goes like this:words are meaningless,they come like cherry blossoms, fading in the sunHope you don't mind ~

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