Nice thoughts…If you want the 3-5-3 syllabic count, it goes like this: look inside (3)ponder your mistakes, (5)change the core (3) For the 5-7-5 syllabic count, it goes like this:words are meaningless,they come like cherry blossoms, fading in the sunHope you don't mind ~
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Nice thoughts…If you want the 3-5-3 syllabic count, it goes like this: look inside (3)ponder your mistakes, (5)change the core (3) For the 5-7-5 syllabic count, it goes like this:words are meaningless,they come like cherry blossoms, fading in the sunHope you don't mind ~
Thanks a lot Grace… I will rework on my haiku… Thank you for the guidance.