His hanging shoulders
The jaded eyes say it all
Pocket is empty.
To struggle. To victory.
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His hanging shoulders
The jaded eyes say it all
Pocket is empty.
To struggle. To victory.
unshaken thoughts 
subtle and yet so endearing the person appears to be ..
nice haiku !
Well crafted haiku Tarun. Very subtle and fragile. Thank you for sharing on Carpe Diem.
I am sure I’ve seen this sad man too many times….well-done….
Oh, I have seen this man too! Well done Tarun
Yes very good, and the difference between jade and jaded is huge.
It seems as if he’s down on his luck, his heart is jaded, or (heavy) worried perhaps. Very beautiful.
Evocative, Tarun.